It's all been said before

You're supposedly the part time lover
And full time friend.
The craggy steep hill
And where the road bends.

You're the last train home
The scenic myopic route
The hand that keys the thoughts
The head that walks on air

You're the secret that I keep
The cries of the gulls
The storm that beckons
The story still unfolds

MjC

Comments

Anonymous said…
Awww... Reminded me of JUNO but cuter.

You dont know the dreams I weave,
you dont know the effect you have,
Just by being you,
You are that and so much more.

Just a small reply to your post! :D
January 11, 2009 8:51 am
krist0ph3r said…
one comment: remove the last line!!!

miss you xxx
January 11, 2009 4:47 pm
Anonymous said…
beautiful lines..
January 15, 2009 9:03 pm
Prasad Narulkar said…
why does evry story end with an "unfolding" phase...
wher and wen is the end??
January 18, 2009 7:09 pm
WeirdISgooD said…
@ rash- Havent watched Juno yet :(

@Krisu, last line removed, miss you too.

@The Pink Orchid- Thanks :) Glad you liked it.

@Prasad - I don't know, but I'm hoping since all is not alright, this isn't the end. All's well that ends well, don't you think ?
January 19, 2009 5:32 am
Anonymous said…
beautiful :)

I hope you'd have written more!
April 07, 2009 2:57 am
goacom said…
And so it should have ended on " the story still funfolds"
June 22, 2009 12:49 pm
WeirdISgooD said…
@ Goacom- Oh lol, if u are referring to my battle with the bulge, the folds are not any fun thank you.
June 22, 2009 9:54 pm
John Doe said…
I absolutely enjoyed this one.
June 29, 2009 2:58 pm
Sorcerer said…
really nice one

"The head that walks on air"
I made an introspection and things after i read that line

I missed so many of your posts

Misson MJC in progress
August 11, 2009 9:05 am
Ess.See. said…
I can so relate for some reason. :) *thumbs up*
August 30, 2009 4:45 pm
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