Sunday, January 11, 2009

It's all been said before

You're supposedly the part time lover
And full time friend.
The craggy steep hill
And where the road bends.

You're the last train home
The scenic myopic route
The hand that keys the thoughts
The head that walks on air

You're the secret that I keep
The cries of the gulls
The storm that beckons
The story still unfolds



Rashi V said...

Awww... Reminded me of JUNO but cuter.

You dont know the dreams I weave,
you dont know the effect you have,
Just by being you,
You are that and so much more.

Just a small reply to your post! :D

Kris said...

one comment: remove the last line!!!

miss you xxx

the pink orchid said...

beautiful lines..

~_ Prasad _~ said...

why does evry story end with an "unfolding" phase...
wher and wen is the end??

WeirdISgooD said...

@ rash- Havent watched Juno yet :(

@Krisu, last line removed, miss you too.

@The Pink Orchid- Thanks :) Glad you liked it.

@Prasad - I don't know, but I'm hoping since all is not alright, this isn't the end. All's well that ends well, don't you think ?

.a. said...

beautiful :)

I hope you'd have written more!

goacom said...

And so it should have ended on " the story still funfolds"

WeirdISgooD said...

@ Goacom- Oh lol, if u are referring to my battle with the bulge, the folds are not any fun thank you.

John Doe said...

I absolutely enjoyed this one.

Sorcerer said...

really nice one

"The head that walks on air"
I made an introspection and things after i read that line

I missed so many of your posts

Misson MJC in progress

Sidra Ch. said...

I can so relate for some reason. :) *thumbs up*